Originally posted by Hoggslayer
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Don't start reading it... wait till he is done or you'll be like the rest of us. -
awesome read as usual!! Can't wait for the next chapterComment
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Just read all nine chapters; gripping and compelling reading!
Amazing that you have made Luis almost a sympathetic character by the relative comparison to his mostly deserving victims.Comment
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Agreed. When I first started, I wanted to hate him. Especially with me being an investigator and now crime scene unit supervisor. But you deal with the cards life has given you. Everybody reacts differently.Originally posted by tradtiger View PostComment
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Muy bien amigo. Mss por favor.Comment
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I've seen this thread before but never took the time to read it, until now!
Awesome write up and as others have said, it's easy to visualize the whole thing and feel like you are walking through the past! A couple of times I had to remind myself that this is a true story!
Looking forward to the next chapter!Comment
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Tagged for later!Comment
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Thank you gents. Appreciate the kind words!Comment
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The effort it took to write this could have been spent on a Chapter 10.Originally posted by Chew View Post
Just sayin.
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lol! See post #31.Originally posted by systemnt View PostThe effort it took to write this could have been spent on a Chapter 10.
Just sayin.
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Hope those were keto pancakesComment
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Another great read Chew, thanks!Comment
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Thanks ChewComment
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Would make a great Netflix series......Comment
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