Sometimes I write poetry...

[Chew]

Oh wow. Dang drunk posts can be interesting!

[Chew]

Thanks guys.

[SaltwaterSlick]

Powerful, sad, true, but few will hear. Even fewer will be compelled to react in a way to help turn it around, only more violence, more loss, more bitterness... as in the time of Sodom and Gomorrah, so many have been lost to evil...

After reading both pieces, I am left with a bitterness in my mouth and a knot in my inner-most being knowing what you have written is sadly true...

[Chew]

Powerful, sad, true, but few will hear. Even fewer will be compelled to react in a way to help turn it around, only more violence, more loss, more bitterness... as in the time of Sodom and Gomorrah, so many have been lost to evil...

After reading both pieces, I am left with a bitterness in my mouth and a knot in my inner-most being knowing what you have written is sadly true...

Yessir. The future is bleak if we keep going the same direction.

[Ellen]

Greatness. Thanks for sharing.

[Froggy]

Powerful words

"Now his unfillable cop shoes are stained crimson and a polluted river of society
Flows onto the dirty street—a torrent let loose by a broken dam of parental ignorance and sloth."

[curtintex]

Amazing, Bobby. Very impressive.

[C.Read]

Duuuude.......that's deep stuff. Greatness for sure Chew!

.......but aren't poems supposed to rhyme? <----that's a joke.

[Swampa]

Well said!

[SKLOSS]

Best poetry I ever done read Bobby! I would have loved to see their faces while you read it in class. [emoji23]


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[forest-hunter]

Great job That poem needs to be read by everyone, espically to anti police people. I think it could do a lot of good. Thanks for sharing it I enjoyed the story with it also.

[Quackerbox]

Powerful, sad, true, but few will hear. Even fewer will be compelled to react in a way to help turn it around, only more violence, more loss, more bitterness... as in the time of Sodom and Gomorrah, so many have been lost to evil...

After reading both pieces, I am left with a bitterness in my mouth and a knot in my inner-most being knowing what you have written is sadly true...

Well said Charlie.


In better news. I got word on two injured brothers yesterday afternoon. Pct. 4 deputy Justin gay who was shot last year and sufferd broken femurs is walking on his own for a bit. Short spells but it's a start. His coworker deputy Gaines took a buck shot round to the groin this week and will be ok

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[Devin]

Well done, Bobby!

[Wilsondrake]

Mesmerizing stuff there

[Hoggslayer]

Great response Bobby. I would have asked for a refund of my tuition if they had ask me to read the first poem.